Nigel, you still haven’t told us the exact nature of the problem. If it is binding that is one thing, if the valve gear is wrong in some way then it may not run even though everything moves freely. Plenty of us can find the original articles, they should be downstairs in my cupboard for instance. I could email copies but you might prefer to find a more local source than NZ. They may only be of limited help if it turns out that there was some error in the original design, which may require either looking through the indices to find later references to the design, or, probably better, learning how to use the Dockstader program and checking the design against that.
My strategy for one like this would be:
If it is binding find out where, eg disconnecting big ends/ eccentric rods etc and reconnecting until I have identified the place where the problem is occurring. Then of course you have to figure out what remedial action is needed depending on the problem. (For example crosshead not aligned with the cylinder bore) If everything has been built with too much precision you can get binding, there has to be enough freedom for the axles to move up and down without causing binding.
If it is a valve gear problem, check the design against the Dockstader program to make sure it is correct. Then check the loco to make sure it is implemented properly. For instance you can blow low pressure air through with drain cocks open and turn the loco over and listen to see when admission and exhaust are occurring. (Low pressure because you don’t want it to actually run, you can take a finger off like that….you just want to hear what is happening) With some engines, you can do this by taking off the valve chest covers and watching the ports open, but not so easy with inside valves or piston valves. You want the barest whisker of lead, LBSC used to talk about the thickness of a tram ticket, which is only a few thou.
There have been engines that would not run because the cylinder covers or gaskets were actually obscuring the connection between the port and cylinder.
Generally steam engines are very forgiving, and will run with valve settings surprisingly far out, but of course they will not perform as well as they should. There are of course lots of things that can go wrong, but as with any trouble shooting, a logical and methodical approach should soon tell you what is wrong.
regards
John